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16 October 2014 @ 01:36 pm
Deception Package, 3/?  
Title: Deception Package
Author: gazerock4eva
Pairings: ReitaxRuki
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance, Smut
Disclaimer: The boys of the GazettE belong to themselves, I only own the story
Chapters: 3/?
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: MalexMale relationship in all its glory
Summary: At first sight, they are as different as two human beings can ever be; a perfect opposite of one another. Influenced by contrasting ways of growing up, of living life, of seeing things and of being looked at by others, they'd never thought how deceptive facades could really be, or what you can find if you take the time and make the effort to look beyond defensive veneers.
Synopsis: Despite all that he had already heard about Reita, Ruki was curious about the other boy more than he was afraid of him. If Reita really wanted to hurt him, absolutely nothing would prevent the older teen from doing that right now. No, instead he'd even come to Ruki's rescue. Though he wasn't sure if it was really because of him that Reita stepped in, or if the reticent blonde had simply used Ruki's plight as an excuse to kick Seiichiro's butt. If asked Reita, it was probably a little bit of both and also a lot of something no one had to know about.





[Chapter 1]
[Chapter 2]





Author's Note: And another one! Enjoy!

Deception Package

Chapter 3


"Follow me." That said Reita proceeded further into the club and Ruki tracked him obediently, all the way to the staff's break room in the back. The music dulled after the door was closed behind them and he let his gaze sway around. There was a table there, a few chairs and a very old couch, lunch boxes and water bottles spread messily atop the counters, a half-empty coffee machine, and lots of magazines and fliers.

"Sit down."

Ruki simply nodded, and since Reita hadn't been very specific as to where he should sit down, he carefully lowered himself onto the edge of that old but surprisingly comfortable, soft couch.

"Here."

Blinking, he discovered a glass of soda in front of his face, held out by a strong hand. All he could do was nod again, accepting the drink and holding it with both hands before glancing up to the teen in front of him. Finally the lighting conditions were good enough to take a proper look at the older boy who was dressed in a white, sleeveless leather vest above a black tank top and equally black jeans with a tangle of chains dangling from one hip, their silvery sparkle complimenting the intricate pendant lying against that sturdy chest. He also noted the black armbands fastened above those biceps and he didn't know if it was just Reita's partiality to straps or a conscious element of the attire to emphasize the muscular build of his upper arms. Either way, even though the blonde's style wasn't one Ruki could ever picture himself sporting, it suited Reita to the T and told that despite his aloof attitude he did place a distinct value in his outer appearance.

"Stay put here until I'm back." Another straightforward and clear instruction, although Ruki really had no desire to go back out there once more anyway.

"Where're you going?" He finally found his voice again, and Reita snorted softly.

"I work here." He replied, watching Ruki's eyes reflect genuine surprise in them.

"You work?" Was Reita the person he had seen behind the bar earlier? When Ruki remembered back to it, he was almost sure about it now. So no ruthless dealer and no gun-swinging gangster. Just a barkeeper.

"Yes, I work." Reita chuckled lowly, and clicked his tongue. "Though I suppose it's something you wouldn't know much about."

The seventeen-year-old lowered his head, watching the bubbles in the filled glass rise to the surface and burst. He felt somewhat uncomfortable because that comment had sounded a bit judgmental, but it was also true. Ruki never wasted a thought on part-time jobs since he had neither need nor motive for it. He never lacked money, for anything. Another reason was that the thing which he did lack was time - studying for all of those nice A's was pretty much a full-time job for him already.

And while the other mused, Reita wordlessly left the room again. The idea of playing guard for somebody was strange, he hadn't really taken anybody under his care since... forever but something about Ruki had definitely caught his attention. The obvious aside, that was. He was only a man after all and the petite brunette was quite an eye-candy, there was no use denying that just like there was no use denying that those reddish lips looked too appealing for their own good. Also to many others, and leaving that lovely little being in the middle of a crowd of drunken people was like pinning a 'free-rape' sign to him. He supposed if he really did leave Ruki on his own and somebody else got to lay hands on him, it would defeat the purpose of Reita freeing the young one from Seiichiro's clutches in the first place. So he might as well finish what he'd started; get the Beauty away from the Beasts and home safely.

With his senior's departure, Ruki dared to wiggle further onto the comfy sofa, snuggling up into its corner and sipping on his water, his gaze wandering around the room. Deep within, his insides still trembled and shrunk randomly with the experienced terror but his head was filled with questions like: Why did Reita work here? What did he need the money for? Did he live alone, maybe? He struck Ruki as the type to. Why was he so hostile towards Seiichiro? Then again, why shouldn't one be hostile towards that asshole...? But still. The two seemed to have some history together. And what was up with that noseband? Why did he wear it?

Despite all that he had already heard about Reita, the stories about the drugs, and the guns, and the rape, yes even murder (even though that one was really ridiculous), Ruki was curious about the other boy more than he was afraid of him. If Reita really wanted to hurt him, absolutely nothing would prevent the older teen from doing that. No, instead he'd even come to Ruki's rescue. Though he wasn't sure if it was really because of him that Reita stepped in, or if the reticent blonde had simply used Ruki's plight as an excuse to kick Seiichiro's butt. If asked Reita, it was probably a little bit of both and also a lot of something no one had to know about.

It was almost 5 a.m. by the time said blonde returned to the break room – only to find his little protégée for tonight dozing. Head pillowed on his lean arms which in turn lay atop the broad armrest of the couch, the younger teen was peacefully asleep. Reita just hm'd and shook his head before going over and nudging the sleeping beauty's slender shoulder.

"Hey." For a moment he pondered what to call the other, and ultimately just went with his name. "Ruki. Wake up."

The addressed boy had troubles prying his eyes open, very much longing for his cushy bed during the first moments of sleepy haze. Blinking, he came to recognize where he was and who he was with, hurriedly scrambling back into a proper sitting position.

"Sorry," he mumbled, rubbing at his right eye with one hand while covering his mouth with the other to stifle a desperate yawn in his delicate palm. How the hell did Reita manage to stay awake all that time? More even, work out there amid all that noise, that air and those people? Quite an awesome power of endurance he must have.

As he stood, Ruki straightened out his clothes and then looked up at Reita in expectancy of more instructions since it was clear that he was, more or less, at the other's mercy. Alone, he wouldn't be able to get away from here.

"Um... I'd be ready to go, then..." He suggested uncertainly.

Well, Reita saw that. "Aren't you forgetting something?" Asking, he observed that delicately pale face with evident amusement, watching Ruki's eyes widen with abrupt realization confirming that he understood well what this was about.

Once more it was a joke on Reita's part, he didn't really expect a kiss nor would he ever extort anybody into something like that; Ruki could have said no and told him to fuck off - which many others would probably have done be they in his place. He was simply quite curious to see how the younger teen would handle the situation because so far, everything Ruki had done was an interesting thing to observe as well as sort of... very much adorable.

And Ruki was planning on handling it with dignity, or try to anyway. His problem was a very simple one, this... kiss he owed, would be his first kiss altogether. He couldn't really admit it out loud, somehow it was awkward, seventeen years old and drop-dead gorgeous and yet he had never kissed anyone. So, he supposed he had to just... roll with it and hope Reita would never notice a thing. That aside and no matter how much he attempted to deny it, he was intrigued by the prospect. For the first time in his life he actually wanted to kiss somebody. He just really, really had no idea how to go about it.

His nerves were aflutter as he took a deep breath, braced himself and made a very confident step towards the other with the intention to make this quick and painless. Quickly coming up he lightly pecked at those full lips even though his intentions to withdraw right away again were thwarted. He didn't get the chance to step back due to Reita's hand grasping for the back of his neck to hold him in place, catching their lips against each the other's in proper contact.

Shocked for a moment with the feel of warm, ply surface pressing to his very own, the petite brunette froze all over, his lips immobile against those of the taller teen even as they brushed and nipped at his plush pair to entice them to some action. All Ruki managed to do was press his lips together more tightly, more out of helplessness than reluctance. He simply felt overwhelmed, which resulted in the entire kiss turning out really... awkward.

Letting go of the shorter boy, Reita eyed him over with meek amusement. "You kiss like a virgin." He stated unabashedly what was supposed to be another casual teasing but turned out to be a perfect bull's eye. Ruki's head snapped to the side, gaze averted to the floor as he bit down onto his pliant lower lip.

For a second, there was complete silence as Reita stared at the slender brunette blankly before huffing in disbelief. "No way."

Latest after that exposing comment, Ruki's cheeks blossomed with a healthy pink color. Reita huffed once more and cocked an eyebrow, the corner of his mouth twitching an incredulous grin. "You are a virgin." Now that's what he called a world shaking discovery. Quite... unbelievable.

He laughed out quietly while Ruki's jaw flexed with the burden of gritted teeth.

"What's so bad about that?" He asked in a rebellious whisper, but with a voice that was firm and flawlessly audible.

"Huh?" The faint grin disappeared from the blonde's half-masked features to make room for an expression of interest.

"What's so bad about it?" Ruki repeated, louder this time, looking up at the other expectedly, if not even a bit of challengingly. Like hell would he be mocked for something like this.

But mockery was far from Reita's mind as he responded with a simple: "Nothing," and chuckled, but his words were honest. "I just. Well." He was surprised. Astounded, even.

"Yeah." Ruki snorted softly, averting his gaze to the side again. "I know what they say."

Of course he knew. Heard it every day behind his back and sometimes, like tonight, it was spat right into his face. Slut. Bitch. Harlot. Whore. He had to be, right? With everyone always leering his way, chasing after him, with everyone admiring, envying his face and desiring, wanting his body. He must have rolled over tons of girls by now, right? He must have gotten laid by tons of guys already, right? That's what beautiful people were there for. Fun. Enjoyment. Decoration.

"But I'm not." A stubborn whisper, poised and yet unmistakably, genuinely sad. "I'm not what they say..."

For a moment, there was silence once again, Reita's astute eyes watching that gorgeous, horribly misjudged, lovely creature very closely. The defiant shimmer in those remarkable eyes as well as the pain that no pride and dignity could hide from a knowledgeable look. A step brought him close to the dejected little presence then, his arm gently curling around that slim waist. With a sudden but gentle pull he brought the smaller body up against his own and angled his head down and to the side, hovering his lips mere inches from the other's sweet pair. One of Ruki's hands gripped a hold on his shoulder, while the second remained idly at the brunette's side. Hazel eyes gazed back at Reita in apprehension and endearing perplexity, soon sliding semi-shut as he touched the younger teen's lips with his, firmly and decisively but with a distinct, tender chariness.

Anxious tension seized every part of Ruki's supple body, breath getting caught in his lungs and warmth rolling over his lithe little figure in a wave, one time, and then once more as he dared to try and clumsily mimic the skilful motions of Reita's lips with his velvety own. There was no domination in that kiss, allowing him to grow more confident in responding to it. A shaky inhale through his petite nose, and a small gasp followed track when a slick tongue drew along the silky surface of his bottom lip, gingerly pushing it apart from its upper mate. It elicited the natural reaction of the younger teen opening his mouth a crack for the slick muscle to slip inside, bringing with it a sensation which washed over him and led to an abrupt tightening of muscles in his stomach, yet it was very pleasant. He sighed softly into the lock of their lips, jet black eyelashes fluttering shut to let the sensory impressions sink in for a moment, until he felt brave enough to let his own tongue brush against its newly acquired playmate in tentative introduction.

He felt a little dizzy, but comfortably dizzy for that, warm and fuzzy inside while his body found itself almost fully free of tension by now, up to the point where he didn't really know if he was still standing on his own or if Reita's reliable arm was what kept him secured on his suddenly weakened legs. The warm, electric tingles in the pit of his stomach intensified, pulling a delicate, sweet sigh out of his chest.

They parted and his mildly kiss-swollen lips received a few soothing, parting caresses more. The young brunette was panting softly, re-opening his eyes again to stare into indefinable counterparts that appeared almost black in the dimness of partially blocked overhead lights. Just beneath the strap of material which ran along that – now that Ruki could see it from such close distance - doubtlessly handsome face, Reita's lips hinted a small, amused smile.

"That's what people call a kiss." He noted composedly and quietly, releasing that shapely little body from his heedful grasp. Turned, he approached one of the counters and took his helmet and his leather jacket off it, throwing the latter towards Ruki who hurried to catch the habiliment.

"Come on. I'll get you home."

Before Ruki followed the other, his pink tongue peeked out from between his still tingling lips, kittenishly licking at the lower one. He had expected someone like Reita to taste of cigarettes, or maybe even alcohol, yet the flavor left in his mouth reminded of neither. He couldn't define what exactly it might be, but it was nice. He still felt somewhat jittery from the kiss, but that was nice as well.

The early morning air outside was awfully chilly and he was very happy to snuggle into the older teen's warm jacket, not bothered by the fact that it was a size or two too big for his slinky frame and instead enjoying the fine, very much pleasant scent of Reita's cologne that clung to the material. His idle thought from yesterday proved to be right as well – riding a bike was pretty damn cool. Even though he had been quite nervous getting onto it first, since it looked and felt kind of unsteady and wobbly, especially as he situated behind Reita and wrapped his arms around that firm waist. His head felt twice as heavy with the helmet on it and he somehow feared he might lose the headgear altogether somewhere along the way because that, too, was a bit too big.

He named the address and then there was the roar of the engine, which was louder than when heard from the distance, before the motorbike was ultimately steered smoothly from its parking spot. Reita drove fast but nowhere near as recklessly as people, Ruki included, assumed bikers to drive. Instead the older teen proved to be fully capable of handling and controlling the vehicle very confidently and adeptly so all of Ruki's fears fell forgotten pretty quickly and he came to really enjoy their small ride through the nightly city.

He silently complemented Reita's obviously excellent sense of direction since they had no troubles finding to Ruki's home on a much shorter route than Seiichiro had taken before. He could only surmise that his taciturn savior knew his way around town well and must have been driving around it a lot.

Getting off the stylish motorbike that had halted a bit away from his home, Ruki handed jacket and helmet back to their rightful owner. The headgear disappeared beneath the seat while the jacket was shrugged back atop the strong shoulders it belonged on.

"Reita."

Gloved hands back to the handlebars of his motorized companion, the addressed turned his head to the younger teen who had taken a hold on his arm to prevent him from driving away too quickly.

Ruki couldn't see that face because of the light reflecting on the surface of the visor which Reita hadn't bothered to put up, but he could almost perceive the calm gaze of those enigmatic, fawn eyes on himself. "Thank you." He spoke softly, sincere gratitude and appreciation tinting the unique melody of his voice; he knew that he owed the other a lot for tonight. He received a short nod in response, unfurling his fingers from their grasp on that powerful arm.

"Take care." Reita sounded a sentence of goodbye, his bike soon speeding down the street again with Ruki watching it until the rear-light eventually dissolved in the darkness of the night.

Glancing at his wristwatch, he perceived his insides twisting up in knots. It was almost six in the morning. His mother must be worried sick and his step-father must be very, very, very pissed off. But there was no way around facing the man, thus the beautiful brunette heaved a grave sigh and slowly started walking towards the flashy house he called his home. This had been one hell of a day and he knew said hell was not yet over. But that was alright.

During his short walk to the luxurious home where his parents waited, he lifted one hand and absentmindedly touched it to his pretty lips, an artless smile working its way onto that sinfully lovely pair of his all by itself.

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random_x13random_x13 on October 16th, 2014 12:55 pm (UTC)
Ohhhh that was so lovely! Who would have thought big bad Reita was actually a softy! that kiss was so sweet! ^^
I am thoroughly intrigued!

<//3
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 07:39 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed! Well I wouldn't say he's a softy exactly, since that sounds rather deprecative; I guess he's just surprisingly empathetic for somebody with his reputation. But that's what this story is largely about - not judging the book by its cover *laughs* I'm sure with that kiss, Ruki'd learnt that, too XD

Let's hope you'll stay intrigued, then! Thank you for your comment <3!
WakuWakuWatamekuroheresy on October 16th, 2014 01:25 pm (UTC)
o(><)o Oh my poor heart!!! How could you write such a lovely thing?? Throughout the entire chapter i felt like my heart was going to burst open and splash pink colored rose petals all around!!! I was grinning like a love-struck idiot nonstop and still i am (=3=)/
IT'S DEFINITELY OBVIOUSLY ONE OF THE FLUFFIEST THING I'VE EVER READ!!! and I LOVED IT!!!! *hug* Ruki's lovely innocence and Rei's bewildering amusement ..... Oh my heart ....

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Off to read it one more time *hug*
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 07:42 pm (UTC)
Well, my Muses have their moments *laughs* I'm glad you had fun reading the chapter and the romance in it!

There's nothing wrong with having a fluff-shock once in a while, especially if it gets you all giddy and fuzzy XD Reita and Ruki surely mix well in this one and I hope you'll continue to enjoy that =)

You're welcome, and thank you as well for your support <3!
Denmurky_murk on October 16th, 2014 04:09 pm (UTC)
Оказывается, все не так как оно есть, а это ведь только начало, но уже герои видят, что их прежнее представление друг о друге, было более чем ошибочным.
Руки не такой каким выглядит, и Рейта не тот о котором так много говорят.
Общественное мнение быстро разбивается, надо только подойти поближе.

Ну, а в дальнейшем, один другого взял на слабо, в какой-то мере это можно описать и так, не то чтобы у Руки был особо другой выбор, хотя мне кажется, он не жалеет об этом. Жалеть надо было начиная с того момента, как он согласился придти сюда at the first place.
Но выходит оно того стоило. Хотя, о последствиях, мы еще узнаем дальше xD

Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 07:56 pm (UTC)
Я думаю, это одна из самых больших проблем сегоднешнего мира. Люди слишком бысто осуждают друг друга, и особенно в школе судьба многих подростков - это быть мишенью для сплетен и предрассудков. Попытаться подойти поближе это трудная работа и многие выбирают путь полегче, слушают что говорят им другие и судят человека по словам окружаюших.

Так что в большинстве случаев надо какой нибудь вот такой толчок, какой был у Руки в сторону Рейты. Инициатива была конечно не его собственная, но припишим это (моим музам) к судьбе XD Я так думаю, жалеть ему в этом случае и в правду нечего, ну и если бы он не согласился на этакое свидание с Сеем, он бы не познакомился с Рейтой. Так что - unlucky at cards, lucky in love *laughs*

I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you kindly for your support <3!
rinsachirinsachi on October 16th, 2014 05:53 pm (UTC)
Before I start writing about this chapter, there is a question which just popped into my mind. Which is you ultimate otp? I mean it seems to be rather obviously ReixRuki but well, one can be mistaken, it might be your otp is simply nothing you write or whatever. Just wanted to know. *laugh*
Now chapter. Today I have kind of a hard time gathering my thoughts so well...
Of cause I loved it, nothing new there, but it still has to be mentioned. I still love this story for what it is and I still love the freshness, because yes it still feels fresh. To mention on the side, I won't be reading phoenix because of that, I have read sooo many band fictions in my life I simply can't any more, but I'm sure it's a good story nonetheless.
Anyway so this is fresh, not only as a fanfiction but also as a written piece at all, for all I am concerned. And I love it for that.
Again the strongest was the prejudice topic, of cause it was, and I am so glad to hear it won't vanish. It simply makes this thing here special to me. I loved the way you portrait how surprised Reita was, and then again so...uh soft and understanding about it while still being him, which means he won't back out if he can have something from it. Until now, this is my favourite Reita character ever. Because he unites this edgy, rebelliously thing we all like to see in him, with his style and image, with the gentle being I'm somehow sure he is beneath. And yeah truth to be told I like him waaay more than ADF Reita, but that is just understandable I think, since those two are simply so different, and both perfect in the way they are, but while ADF Reita feels like a totally foreign person, totally detached from the Gazette Reita (not a bad thing at all), this one here feels more familiar and then again it's someone new and exiting and you simply want to get to know him so so bad. I have to admit Rei was never my favourite person in Gazette but this one here? Hell I would love to get to know him. *laughs* So yes,, character development is utter perfection here.
Ruki is, hu...okay I haven't thought about Rukis character yet, not like this analytical and stuff. When I do I'll tell you, but it feels wrong to just...pull something out of nothing now just to make it complete. But what I can tell you, I DO like him very much and I love this contrast between the confidant rich ice prince and the shy virgin very much. No wonder Rei takes some interest in him, and who would not totally make full use of being allowed to be his first kiss. So the kisses, I actually have to say, where wooooow. Loved the way they were described, really. Rukis shyness, but how he enjoyed it, and when he realized he really wanted to kiss Rei, god yes. And the way Rei did it, like no pressure but then at the same time leading and somehow still demanding and so Reita. <3
Acutally all I can think about now is this kiss. *laughs*
So I'll leave it with that, unless I again remember something and come back.
I am very curious about what's going to happen next, not only with Reita, but Rukis family a swell. But how can his mom (I don't dare to expect anything from his step-dad) not be on his side, when she hears what Mr. Asshole tried to do?
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:18 pm (UTC)
Oh, that's fairly easy *laughs* You were on the right track there, it's of course Reituki. I don't know, that pair is just perfect in my mind, no matter what scenario I stick them into. I think 90% of everything I wrote for the fandom was ReixRu, and I don't think that's ever gonna change. They're so just purrrrfect.

I'm happy you're enjoying the story and the alternative universe I created. To be honest, one of the reasons I don't write that many band-fics anymore is also because I sort of grew tired of it. I mean I wrote Unspoken in order to get back into the pairing in general, but with ADF and DP it's two AU stories I'm working on. Phoenix is a re-up of an older story and it's not like I really work on it except of reuploading the chapters *laughs* So don't worry, I totally get where you're coming from.

The topic of prejudices and rumors and how they affect people - especially young people - is the main theme of this story indeed and I don't think it's going to vanish from it. It's the base that the whole plot is built upon, if you take its foundation out from underneath the building it will collapse. And I certainly don't want this fiction to collapse *laughs*

Aye, I think this Reita, even though he's cool and badass as well, is a great bit... softer than ADF Reita. For one he's younger, and for two he's not quite as hardened by all the horrible stuff that ADF Reita had to go through. ADF Reita is that violent, angry, protective and overly dangerous powder keg is while DP Reita is actually almost the exact opposite because he's calm and collected and his anger is much less... destructive - to others and most importantly to himself. He's reserved but he's not quite as unsociable as ADF Reita either *laughs* As is I always loved the image of Reita as a tough guy, but of course that's a characteristic that you can take to different extremes.

If I had to choose between the two though... I think I would still want ADF Reita as my boyfriend XD He's more... broken and because I'm pretty broken myself, he's just more appealing to me because I can relate. I guess wrecks attract wrecks so that they can either be wrecks together or fix each other up *laughs* Anyway! DP Reita is just as awesome though, I wouldn't mind a boyfriend like that either because frankly, it's hard to find either type of Reita in nowadays men.

Well, it's only been three chapters so it's indeed difficult to say much about Ruki's character yet. I mean I could say a lot about him but I know him much better, so that doesn't count *lol* He pulls the pretty, rich boy image off quite well and we yet have to get a deep enough look behind that mask to be able to really evaluate his personality.

I'm happy you enjoyed the kiss scene! Sera and I both love to be descriptive, and I think that one kiss scene was about as long as this entire chapter in the actual RP. It was quite a bit of work for me and my Muses to put it together like that, so I'm delighted you thought that it turned out so well *laughs*

I'm pretty sure Ruki won't be telling his mother about what happened with Seiichiro. I don't think many a boy would in his position, especially since boys usually are more prone to talk about most things with their fathers and as we've seen, Ruki's relationship to his step-dad is very... chilly. But then again, who knows? Well, I do... But that's besides the point! XD

Thank you very much, m'dear, for your support and appreciation! Your comments are always a joy to read <3
Karytakyoselflove on October 17th, 2014 12:30 am (UTC)
Yay another chapter! That kiss scene was really amazing xD Loved it. Reita is all 'i'm going to kiss you then bye.'

Lol, nah, he was really sweet about it all. Cant wait to see how their relationship progresses <3
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:20 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed the kiss scene and the coolly casual way Reita handled it in *lol*

If all goes well, you'll get to see that quite soon, too *laughs*

I'm happy you liked the chapter and the direction this story is going; thank you for your comment <3!
fansandflamesfansandflames on October 17th, 2014 03:47 am (UTC)
Ah I can't I'm dying slowly, filled with so much gushyness and exclamation of "Aw's" and blushing more than Ruki xD. You write Reita in my most favorite way XD and Ruki as well it's so wonderful that kiss was much more than I expected it to be, but of course you're writing it so it's top notch as usual :D I'd truly love to write with you one day or brainstorm ideas with you because I love how your write ^///^. But anyway I seriously can't wait to see how things develop between them as well as at school after this and at home. I'm also curious as to seeing a bit more into Reita's life as well. Amazing chapter as always I hope you update again soon. <3
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:27 pm (UTC)
Well, I'm glad the chapter managed to fill you up with all the giddy and fuzzy feelings I was feeling when I worked on it *laughs*

This portrayal of Reita is one of my favorite ones, too, so I'm happy that you're happy with his character in this - as well as Ruki's =) I admit ever since the thing with Sera and our RP I don't really write with other people anymore, nevermind that I would probably lack the time to right now. I'm already happy if I can manage to work on my stories during the week XD But who knows, maybe one day we might =)

Well, then I hope the way this fiction will progress won't disappoint, and I'll try to keep the waiting periods between the chapters as short as possible *laughs*

Thank you for your support, m'dear <3!

kiraqrakiraqra on October 17th, 2014 11:44 am (UTC)
Uwaaahh im dying ~
The kiss scene~~~~ I just can't take it! My heart can't take it ♥♥♥
This is really cuuutteee, sweeetttt ~ lovely story. I love it i love it i love it!! >\\\< thank-you for made this awesomeness.
(Ugh im sorry for my poor english )

Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:28 pm (UTC)
Well, I'm glad you and your heart enjoyed and survived through that kiss scene *laughs*

You're welcome, I'm happy you liked the story so far and don't worry about your English, practice makes perfect and I could understand you just fine, so it's all good =)

Thank you for your support!
Emmi-Stina: Ruki - NAMELESS LIBERTY DISORDER HEAVENakumura on October 17th, 2014 01:51 pm (UTC)
Oh my gosh, this was so adorable chapter!

The whole time I was reading this, I felt like my heart was going to melt because of this cuteness and adorableness. I'm so happy that, after all, Reita did take care of Ruki even though he was working. And that part when they kissed the first time and Reita said that Ruki was kissing like a virgin, I was purring here *__* Well, now Reita knows that Ruki isn't a whore who is offering himself to everyone. That little sexual tension between them was almost invisible but I still could sense it! If you know what I mean. And their second kiss - aww it was so adorable! I think I'm using those words way too much in this comment but... No can do XD

I want to know more about Reita, he is such an interesting character in this story. He is acting so coolly but then there's that kind of aura which gives me thoughts that he really cares. He could have left Ruki there with Seiichiro but he didn't do it and I'm happy about it. At first I thought he was just an asshole but then again, I had to think about it again. He is... sweet. And I can't even imagine what will happen in the next chapters between him and Ruki. Or well, I have my ideas but I guess they're wrong XD I want to see and read what you have planned ^^

Ruki is interesting character too, so innocent, pure and lovely rich kid who gets too interested about Reita who has a motorcycle, different kind of style in clothes and seems to dislike many people. This combination is absolutely my favorite detail in high school stories! *__* Rich kid and a little bit older rebel boy, oh yes, I like that very, very much. I love your writing style so much because you describe things perfectly and it makes it easier to see these happenings clearly in my mind. So, go girl, you rock!

Thank you for this chapter, looking forward to the next one! <3
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:40 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked the chapter!

It's good to know the emotions were palpable and well-conveyed, that's always one of the main goals I follow when I write. Those two mix very well together in the setting of this story and I enjoy writing them, so it's great to know others enjoy reading them just as much. The vibe of sexual tension was intended, they're both teenagers after all XD But I'm glad it wasn't overdone or stood in the foreground too much =)

Admittedly, this portrayal of Reita is among my favorites, so I'm delighted to hear you're so intrigued by his character. Hard shell, soft core; that type of man was always my favorite *laughs* Reita is that type of guy, too, I guess; cool, tough and badass yet also gentle and caring with those who manage to get closer and get to know him better. I definitely have a lot planned for him and Ruki both, so yes, let's see if your ideas will match up with my ideas =3

Well, they always say opposites attract and I suppose that's true for Rei and Ru in this, too. Ruki does pull off the pretty, rich kid image very well, yes *laughs* I'm happy you're liking his character as well, and I do look forward to keep delving deeper into both of their personalities. Hopefully my writing and its style will continue to please you ^_^

You're welcome! Thank you very much as well, m'dear, for your support and appreciation <3!

leader_kaileader_kai on October 17th, 2014 03:19 pm (UTC)
Wollte das eigentlich erst lesen, wenn deine andere fic fertig War, aber brauchte dann doch was zum lesen xD
Ich muss sagen bisher ist die Story ein wenig vorhersehbar gewesen. Aber ich denke mal, dass nicht lange so bleiben wird.
Ich bin auf jeden Fall gespannt wie es weiter geht!
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:49 pm (UTC)
Na dann freut's mich doch, dass ich Lesestoff verschaffen konnte.

Hm, na ja, das ganze Szenario an sich ist jetzt auch nichts Unvorhersehbares. Es war halt nicht unser Ziel, etwas Unberechenbares und total Innovatives zu erschaffen, wir wollten einfach nur Spaß haben und unserem Hobby nachgehen. Zudem stehen die meisten Sachen bereits im header, und wenn man liest, dass das Pairing der Story ReitaxRuki ist und die Genres aufgelistet bekommt, ist's klar, dass man schon eine gute Vorstellung hat, was in der Story passieren wird. Dann geht es weniger darum, was passiert, sondern wie es passiert und wenn es dann passiert, geht es weniger darum, was es ist sondern wie es ge- und beschrieben wird. Diese Story hebt sich weniger mit der eigentlichen Idee und dem Szenario ab (weil diese halt nichts Neues sind), sondern (hoffentlich) mit der Darstellung jener =)

Insofern hoffe ich mal, dass es weiterhin spannend und interessant bleibt, und bedanke mich fürs Kommentar <3!
mistressxravenmistressxraven on October 18th, 2014 04:05 am (UTC)
That is so sweet! That is way do cannot believe everything you hear about someone. Get to know a person before judging them.

Can't wait for more Reitukiness!! lol
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:50 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! And yes indeed, you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover. Though sadly, prejudices is something humanity can't exist without *laughs*

And more of it you shall have =3 Thank you for your support!
creepy_cally on October 18th, 2014 04:09 am (UTC)
That was a hella teeth rotting reituki there! It's been a while since I read something sweet bout these two. Though that seiichiro dude deserves to get his ass kick, meh... at least reita got the best of both sides, saving a certain beauty and kicking the asshole he had probably wanna kick for a long time already. Sudden luck that comes out of no where... haha. Good chapter by the way. Enjoyed reading it all the way. :)
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:54 pm (UTC)
Well, I do hope you kept all your teeth though! *laughs* I'm glad you enjoyed the romance and the fluff, we all need a bit of that every now and again in our everyday lives =)

Reita surely did kill two birds with one stone on that night, and I completely agree that Seiichiro deserved to get socked for being the a in the hole *lol*

I'm happy you liked the chapter and the story so far, hopefully that's how it's gonna stay. Thank you for your support <3!
gAbbYgabbyrockzz on October 19th, 2014 10:18 am (UTC)
Ahhhh it's cuuute. I wouldn't mind getting a real kissing lesson with Reita :3
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:55 pm (UTC)
I wonder who would! *laughs* He's an awesome teacher after all *snickers*

Happy you enjoyed the chapter; thanks for your comment!
Kimubishiebe on October 19th, 2014 11:10 am (UTC)
And the award for best kissing scene in a fanficion goes to- my God I went completely numb to the real world as I read this chapter. I could feel, see the chemistry between them happening! I am totally hooked and I cant WAIT until more updates come!!!
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 08:57 pm (UTC)
I'm very happy you enjoyed the scene and thought it award-worthy ^_^ Those two certainly mix well in this scenario so far and I hope it'll manage to continue pulling you into that created world like this.

I also hope the next chapter won't disappoint in that regard; and thank you for your support <3!
sarky_chepooka on October 19th, 2014 02:53 pm (UTC)
Well this just keeps getting better and better :3 The kisses were ADORABLE! When Reita told him he kissed like a virgin I was MORTIFIED on Ruki's behalf, but... well, it earned him another kiss, so I guess it was worth the moment of embarrassment xD

It certainly seem like Ruki thought so, considering he kept touching his lips and smiling ;) Oh, the fluff~ <3 Fingers crossed his parents won't kill him for coming home way later than they told him to :/

Thanks for another great chapter!^^
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 09:01 pm (UTC)
I'm happy you enjoy the development of story, plot and characters so far =) And yes, I imagine not many would have reacted the way Reita did to the truth. For some reason or the other, most high schoolers think that being a virgin at that age is something to make fun of and laugh at. But fortunately for Ruki, Reita wasn't one of those.

Yay for fluff XD And certainly all toes and fingers crossed for Ruki to survive the parental wrath. Don't we all know how hard that can sometimes be.

You're very much welcome, and thank you as well for your support <3!
aya_rockz: rei_by_caterisaya_rockz on October 19th, 2014 03:12 pm (UTC)
oooooh reita. wow you just kissed him and then... bye! lol but that was so sweet hmmm
ruki what are you gonna doooo~
Kate, Kathrin, Katjagazerock4eva on October 29th, 2014 09:04 pm (UTC)
*laughs* Aye, Reita sure managed that kiss in a coolly casual way. But so long as everybody enjoyed it, 's all good I guess XD

Thanks for your comment!